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Wednesday, January 24, 2007
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Robert E. Lee was a Conferate general. He did some great things in the war that slowed down the Conferacy's demise. He was born during the mexican american war. He was born in Virginia. He belived in the state.
You should be more consise and detailed in your explenations. Your posts look rushed and uninteresting. from your post, i learned a few simple facts but i got no idea about who your character was or why he was resilient. You should consider revising your work and adding more info.
You have so much knowledge and information that you can discuss with ease, but let's work on getting that knowledge to appear in your writing, also. Let's sit down and talk about Robert E. Lee and post this again, or perhaps there is someone you are more interested in researching more deeply that you could focus on.
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You should be more consise and detailed in your explenations. Your posts look rushed and uninteresting. from your post, i learned a few simple facts but i got no idea about who your character was or why he was resilient. You should consider revising your work and adding more info.
You have so much knowledge and information that you can discuss with ease, but let's work on getting that knowledge to appear in your writing, also. Let's sit down and talk about Robert E. Lee and post this again, or perhaps there is someone you are more interested in researching more deeply that you could focus on.
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